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Deep Emotions by ~urtearsfillmyvains:iconurtearsfillmyvains:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen > Free & Blank Verse


I shut my eyes to make sure I am not dreaming this. This one meaningful moment in my existance. You.

Something starts to pull at my neck, kind of a tearing if you think of it.
It is a bit warm, and very silent now. I open my eyes.
I see you. Relief washes over my whole body, and for one second I remember the feeling on my neck, but that soon fades as I feel your warm, soft, hard lips on mine. Pulling all the life out of me, and yet giving me so much strength that I can hold you there in my arms for all eternity. Time stops, all stops, except for our feverent passion, our endless emotions, our pure helplessness for eachother.

I am finally one.
©2008-2010 ~urtearsfillmyvains
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~AshleyTheDinosaur Feb 26, 2009, 2:29:06 AM
this is simply beautiful <3
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~urtearsfillmyvains Mar 1, 2009, 11:46:51 PM
thanx :3
its how i felt at the time, and i tried, but thankyou so much, it really means alot that people somewhat like it

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~Xxx-needingyou-xxX Nov 19, 2008, 6:08:57 AM
this is beautiful. it reminds me of those times were you feel sick of everything and the person you love can just take that feeling away with a smile, a laugh, a simple touch etc..

btw. thanx for the fav
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~urtearsfillmyvains Dec 3, 2008, 4:24:26 PM
your welcome for the fav =D
thankyou so much for commenting. i really appreaciate it that someone took the time to care, and that someone actually got it :) <3 thanx, i really needed it :)

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~Xxx-needingyou-xxX Dec 10, 2008, 4:16:09 AM
it was just honest it seriously moves me ^^
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!ana2606 Sep 29, 2008, 11:15:40 AM
i like this. it's really simple, no big words, but a big and strong meaning. and i completely know what you mean by it. the greatest feeling ever...

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lost in the meaningful attempt of becoming more than just another empty soul
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~urtearsfillmyvains Sep 29, 2008, 4:48:34 PM
thankyou so very much. i thought it was good, but no one had wrote a reply until you. thanx alot. i know its kind of plain, but thats all i could think of at that moment to express my feelings.
its good that you like it :D

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